In this
section, Mat commits all his resources to his plan.
Tam fires
arrows at Trollocs. Throughout the battle, it has been regularly shown that Tam
and the other Two Rivers archers hardly ever miss. Having enjoyed some amount
of success with their bows, the archers abandon them for lack of arrows. They
enter the fray in wedges, trying to split up Trolloc armies assaulting the
Whitecloaks.
Making an
example, Fortuona dispatches Karede, a beloved guardian, and others of her
Deathwatch guards to the front lines as punishment for letting her be put in
danger. Then she publicly turns her ire on Mat. While safety is presented as
the foremost reason for their rift, the final nail in the coffin is, as always,
one of personality. She deftly diverts the attention from the strategy and its
results to the man behind them. “This
entire battle has been a disaster. You lose ground each moment. You talk
lightly and joke, refusing proper protocol; I do not think you approach this
with the solemnity befitting your station.” For readers and Seanchan nobles, it is clear
Mat will never abide by her rule. Readers know Mat better than they know
tactics. The author marries the irrefutable reason of Mat’s behaviour to a
debatable reason in the form of his tactics.
The Dark
One spins a new reality for Rand, one in which there is no value to human life.
Children are murdered callously, might makes right, and the very concept of
compassion is absent. The Dark One’s words are chilling: MEN WHO THINK THEY ARE OPPRESSED WILL SOMEDAY FIGHT. I WILL REMOVE FROM
THEM NOT JUST THEIR WILL TO RESIST, BUT THE VERY SUSPICION THAT SOMETHING IS
WRONG. COMPASSION IS NOT NEEDED. WHAT I SHOWED BEFORE IS WHAT MEN EXPECT. IT IS
THE EVIL THEY THINK THEY FIGHT. BUT I WILL MAKE A WORLD WHERE THERE IS NOT GOOD
OR EVIL. THERE IS ONLY ME. Rand responds by beginning to spin a world
without the Dark One.
Mat sends
Min to follow Fortuona, but keeps Karede and the other exiled Deathwatch Guards.
Surprisingly, the Seanchan only comprise a quarter of his forces.
Tam fights
Trollocs. He wins. Lan meets him and salutes him. Both of Rand’s father figures
are solid, unchangeable, and are able to stand against anything. No reed practiced how to bend in the wind.
It simply did. Tam watches children and elderly take to the field of
battle, to collect arrows and identify the wounded. As in the Two Rivers back
in The Shadow Rising, the battle is not just the men’s battle, it is everyone’s
battle. This depth of involvement, down to the least trained and least able indicates
the level of desperation. It proves to be an effective way to raise the stakes without
resorting to a contrived battle scene putting heroes in danger. In fact, it
works despite Tam’s victory over the Trollocs only minutes earlier.
Elayne lays
Bryne to rest. Adding to the desperation, Elayne hears a summary of the bad
news: “The camp at Dashar Knob has been abandoned,” Birgitte said. “I don’t
know where Cauthon is. The Seanchan have forsaken us.” Elayne responds by
raising her banner, to offer some point of hope to the troops. Nonetheless, she
concludes that humankind did not have days remaining, but hours. Demandred begins sending balefire into
Elayne’s troops trying to kill her, so Birgitte pulls her from the field.
Galad
attacks Demandred, announcing his identity. Everything feels right to him. The right thing had always seemed clear to
Galad before, but never had it felt as right as this. With Mat’s medallion in hand and an introduction like
that which ties his very identity to the action he is about to take, readers
are easily led to believe Galad is going to pull this off.
Nynaeve
sews to save Alanna’s life. The most mundane of skills and Nynaeve’s creativity
and stubbornness may be all that keeps Alanna alive long enough to save Rand.
Of all the scenes of courage in this book, I don’t think any stole my breath as
much as this one. For all her power, Nynaeve’s ability to care and to try save lives,
her desire to heal is what makes the difference. Her brief scenes packed a
strong emotional punch.
Mat orders
Bashere to carry his orders. “I don’t care if you’ve bloody been touched by the Shadow!”
Mat said. “Every man has had the Dark One’s fingers on his heart, and that’s the
bloody truth. You can fight through it.” He then gathers his remaining forces to keep
Demandred pinned on the plateau. A ta’veren
twist brings Teslyn at an opportune moment.
Egwene feels
the absence of Gawyn deeply. She needs something to fill the void, someone to
watch her back when she goes back to the battle. Leilwin is the only potential warder available
who has loyally served and saved her. Egwene finally embraces her former enemy
and completes her character arc, making peace with the decision to bond Leilwin,
bringing the representative of her most hated opponents as close as her beloved
Gawyn was.
Demandred wounds
Galad, and is wounded in turn. Then Demandred lops off Galad’s arm, and
seemingly kills Galad. Despite that Demandred was worried and is wounded, Galad
did everything the heroes are supposed to do, using a ter’angreal, being one of
the world’s best swordsmen, and never giving in, even going so far as to spit
at Demandred in defiance as an Aiel would. If Galad can’t beat Demandred, can
anyone?
Androl
approaches Taim in disguise and manages to steal the seals. It would have been
easy and simple to use a Gateway to sever Taim’s hand off and drop it into
another Gateway to send the Seals directly elsewhere. More believable too.
Echoing the reader’s thoughts often works to suspend their disbelief, but seems
to fall short on this occasion. “You’re
not going to believe this, but…”
Arganda’s battle
with a Trolloc plays off of Demandred’s taunts, with him falling to a Trolloc. He
faced just the one, and lost. Only wounded, he is later revived and concludes
they are doomed. “To win… Light, to win
we’d need to break these Sharans, rescue the pikemen – they will soon be
surrounded by the Trollocs – and each man of ours would need to kill at least
five of those beasts! That’s not even counting Demandred.”
Rand weaves
a reality which is too good, and demonstrates that removing the Shadow would
change those he loves as surely as the Dark One would remake them. IN KILLING ME, I WOULD WIN. NO MATTER WHAT
YOU DO, I WILL WIN. YOU CANNOT SAVE THEM.
I am
thrilled with the way Mat contrasts the battle to a game of cards, how I
recognize that it is playing out like a game of cards, and that one of Robert
Jordan’s hobbies was playing cards. It feels right. Mat and Demandred have been
slowly adding chips to the pot, neither one committing all their forces. Keeping
the Seanchan in reserve with their damane
has kept Demandred from committing too strongly, lest Mat use them to gain some
advantage. Demandred holds the advantage of both time and numbers. Mat can hold
him off for only so long. With no reserves after the Seanchan departure, Mat’s
armies look more vulnerable. Demandred poses a problem to Mat’s attempt to
contain him until an attack from Egwene begins drawing channelers away.
Olver and
Faile’s caravan infiltrates a Shadow supply line, and get brought to the
fighting at Merrilor. Aravine has been a Darkfriend all along, but the traitor’s
identity is not as important as her story. She had hoped to leave that life
behind and return to the Light, but even a small step in the Shadow is one too
many. There is no return. Despite this warning, the earlier attempts to cast
Lanfear in an uncertain light are too effective, and readers may retain some
hope for at least one Forsaken to be redeemed.
Events seem set in stone now. Mat is committed, Rand is losing hope, Perrin is still
wounded. The few bright spots shown by Elayne and Tam have been quickly overturned.
Only Egwene and Androl offer a glimmer of hope. And Olver.
With the
Horn taken by Darkfriends and his friends captured, pitiful Olver has been
ignored. Knowing that all is lost, he still makes a desperate attempt to kill the
Dreadlord holding Faile captive. The moment when the meekest of characters
tried to win in the face of impossible odds felt like a turning point, when
once again, momentum can begin building for the heroes.
Writing Lessons:
Use
character to motivate actions, rather than strategy or logic.
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